As an example the female CIA spy, upon first being introduced to a group of people in a professional setting, responds with "I love your outfit." The "Mission Communication Analyst" responds "Well thank you. The female characters, despite holding powerful traditionally male roles, end up being stereotypical women obsessed with clothes. Once from the CIA spy, and once from the terrorist. In one area we get the exact same dialogue twice. Some parts of the book were exceptionally repetitive. He clearly needs someone to help edit his work. Typos, grammatical errors, and misspellings litter the pages of this book. Based on their performance with this book, neither of those people should ever work again as editors. The book is self-published, but was allegedly edited by two people. He offered a free copy in exchange for an honest review. In the message he suggested that if I liked Michael Crichton, I might like his book. Like many of the other reviewers of this book, I received a spam message from Mr. It's badly written, badly edited and contains blatant plagiarism. Don't bother reading this book, even if Mr.
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